Model answer TOEIC writing questions 6-7

Your response will be scored on

  • the quality and variety of your sentences, 
  • vocabulary, and 
  • organization. 
  • You will have 10 minutes to read and answer each e-mail.

From: International Student’s Office 

To: New students

Subject: Orientation

Sent: April 1, 4:32 P.M. 

Welcome to the university! This is the international Student’s Office. There will be an orientation session on 7th April at 9:00 am, and a welcome party on 8th April at 6:00 pm. Both will take place in the main hall. Please let us know if you can attend. In the meantime, if you need any information, please feel free to contact us. 

Directions: Respond to the e-mail. Respond as if you are a new student. In your e-mail, say whether you will attend or not, and make at least one request for information.

Plan: (you don’t have to write this separately in the test; I’m just doing it to show you how to start. You should write your plan, then ‘fill it out’ with your essay.) (1 minute or less!)

attend

how to get a student card?

Response I

Thank you for your email telling me about the orientation session and the welcome party. I will be happy to attend. I do have one question, though. I would like to use the library, but I do not have a student card yet. Could you tell me how I can get a student card, please.

With best wishes

OR

Response II

Plan

attend

can I come late?

Thank you for your email inviting me to the orientation session and the welcome party. I would like to come to both, but I am afraid that I have a class until 6:30 on 8th April. Is it possible for me to come at that time, even though I will be late? I will attend the orientation session, of course.

Yours